Saturday, 24 September 2011

Could Do Better

They didn’t like his writing no
Shouting hackneyed inadmissible
Lacking punctuation grammar
And that missing past participle

Though he carried on persistently
Being bludgeoned by the critics
For tired use of the vernacular
As more like emblematic lyrics

Having read the works of genius
Lead by the nose by prose
He threw away his work so far
As nothing more than comatose

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